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This is a real life story, so bear with me as I give some background information.
We have a "free ad" section at our web site where people can place
a free ad for their business. Ads are submitted weekly and published on the
web. Now, to place an ad, someone has to visit our web site and fill out a form
containing their email address and the copy of the ad. We try to make it as
easy as possible, but the bottom line is many people are not serious, and don't
have a clue as to how to run a business on the web.
When the ads are received, we send an automatic response to the person who
sent it. Perhaps one out of ten has an incorrect email address and the response
is returned as undeliverable. What a waste of time.
How do these people think that people can respond to their ad if their email
address is incorrect?
Going through our archives, I found some real gems - what do you think about
these offers?
"Join our MLM and earn beg income". This is either a typo or they
are promising very little in the way of earnings. This person obviously didn't
proof their copy before submitting the ad.
Another ad promised huge earnings, but gave no contact information. Not a web
site URL or an email address to be found. Guess they figure it is so powerful
an offer, we will find them - another waste of time.
"Make Money! Turn $10 into $40,000 CASH like I did" - but wait -
this guy is using a free email account. If he's making all that money, wouldn't
you think he could afford one for ten bucks a month - maybe he is saving all
those $10 bills so he can earn $40,000 CASH with each one.
"You can make 500% Profit without investing any money" - need I say
more!
"Tired of the "Rat Race"? Free online training and no capitol
needed!" Did this guy mean "capital"? I'll hang on every word
he has to say.
"Exciting,EasyandProfitable" - guess this person never learned how
to use that big bar on the bottom of the keyboard. I think you see where this
article is going.
If you are going to advertise a business on the web, and you present less than
a professional image - you're not going to do business. If you present yourself
like the above examples, enjoy your "walk on the quiet side". Most
people are not idiots, and I'm sure the authors of the above ads are not either.
But why give that impression? I sure wouldn't do business with any one of them.
I read another ad for Web Design and the HTML coding in his ad was wrong. That
sure built a lot of confidence.
Most people scan poorly constructed ads and simply "click away".
Guess they feel like I do. If you don't care enough to write a credible ad,
why should I think you'll care about me if I buy from you?
Many people rely too heavily on the spell checker on their computer. This is
a mistake. After you do spell check, get someone else to read it. When writing
something, many times you get so close to the article, you miss mistakes that
someone else would quickly find. Many words that are being used incorrectly
will pass spell check.
Remember - you usually only get one "shot" when a person sees your
ad. If it is well written, and has an attention getting headline, you just might
make that sale. If you want to do business on the web, get serious or people
will come to the conclusion that you are someone who "Doesn't Have a Clue"
and look elsewhere.
About the Author:
Bob publishes the free weekly "Your Business" Newsletter Visit his
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